Rude?
Man, you haven't met rude until you get Campitelli jumping all over your ass about reading the damn sticky that he spent YEARS of his life writing on how to post to this forum and how to film form-checks. Important shit, like POST ONE VIDEO and stuff like that.
But you didn't get Campielli. You got me. The less polite one.
I have no idea why we took the time to write the damn thing - no one ever fucking reads it. And the ones who do think THEY ARE THE SPECIAL FUCKING SNOWFLAKE that is the OBVIOUS EXCEPTION to Our Learned Guidance.
But I watched your damn video, you know, the ONLY ONE YOU POSTED, and noted that you could widen your grip and then get your hands down a little more and GRIP THE BAR, and that you could get your knees out a little better on the descent, and KEEP THEM OUT better on the ascent. Other than that these look pretty good, especially considering your illiteracy.
Now, go forth and fix these minor issues and post One. Single. Video. Next time or I'll get Tom to answer.