IPB: nice to see you again.
Didn't look all that bad. It's a power snatch, vice full, but your extension looked good. I didn't see any early elbow bend either, which is pretty uncommon for novice oly lifters. Bar path stayed close through the second pull too, then moved out a bit (but I've seen much worse) after the jump/pelvic contact. That may be an issue as the weight gets really heavy.
I'd work on transitioning to full snatches. Do some sequence PS then OHS immediately after (without putting weight down). Try to move smoothly between the two movements until it becomes seamless (Bill Starr recommended this somewhere, but I can't remember where at the moment).
Oh, and don't get frustrated. It'll take many reps for this to get "pretty." Just keep working it.