Just FYI, if you want Rip's take you have to post your questions in his Q&A forum. Here, you'll just get us mortals.
On your program:
First, there is at least one other thread on where to place DL on TM, and a lot of people put it on the max day rather than the volume day, so you're in good company.
Second, your gym allows deadlifts but not power cleans? While not allowing both is retarded, you really should challenge them to justify this. I can see if someone is dropping the weights from shoulder height, so have a rule against that and make sure you explain to the one or two lifters who actually train sensibly that they need to control the weight or they will lose the privilege. Show them that you can control the weight and won't be an exhibitionist who tosses the weights to get people to notice them. Sorry, I'm sure you are more frustrated with this, but this crap drives me bat shit crazy (& part of why I train at home).
Third, pullups should progress just like the other exercises. Either you are increasing reps (up to about 3 sets of 15), or then, adding weight. While some progression is a given if your body weight is increasing, you will likely not be gaining weight all that rapidly at the intermediate stage unless you are eating a whole lot and adding fat as well as lean. It just wasn't clear from what you wrote for pullups if you were programming them for progression.
Cheers.