DL Form Check

[Athenaum]

I would appreciate any criticism of my DL. Thanks in advance for any replies!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UxIcZcQplLw

[Mac Ward]

Bar path looks pretty good...not much to see from this angle other than your head is a little high. Try looking at a spot a few feet closer...tough to see what you are doing and where you are looking from this video.