Originally Posted by
Justin Smale
The width of your stance seems fine, the bigger problem are your toes are pointed out to the side way more than the 30 degrees recommended in the book. Fix the setup error first then see what it does to your movement because it might fix things downstream.
That said, you're going down 2 inches too far and losing the lumbar extension because of that (at least on the video from the side) and when you do that you're sinking forward into your knees and you end up pushing these from your toes instead of mid-foot. Look at when your heels come off the ground. I think you could also review the master cue, because it doesn't seem like you have the bar over mid-foot in the side video.