Is this lumbar too rounded?

[amazingjay]

It felt alright when I was lifting the weights, so I thought nothing of it. Then, after watching the video, I was wondering if there's an acceptable range of roundness when one is lifting really heavy (e.g., new PR). Thoughts? (oh, and if you think it's too rounded, what remedy would you recommend?)

[nkelman]

These looked fairly fucked to me. I'm just going to throw random things I see.

Hips shoot up first
Hips higher than shoulders
Retracted Scapular at the bottom and shrug at top
Bent arms
Yanking the bar up
Round Lumbar
Bad neck position
Bar not even near close to body
Too far over bar

Read the book and start again.

[Immortal_k]

Please refrain from deadlifts until you (re)read the book, you'll just hurt yourself. nkelman is right.

[amazingjay]

Points taken. Thanks!

EDIT: Ouch... I'm feeling something on my right hip now. >.<