You are correct in that the stance is about 3-4 inches too wide, and you're breaking at the hips a split second before the knees. You can often correct the weight on the outside of the feet by "screwing your feet into the ground" during the descent, but keep in mind that what feels right vs. wrong doesn't always correlate with what is right and wrong; it's a frustrating truth, but these look better than last time. Keep going!