You need to set your knees earlier. You're mostly just bending at the hip right away. It needs to be hips and knees at the same time.
As for the bar path, I'm curious to see what the other side of the bar looks like. It's not uncommon for side views to look like this because the bar is twisting. So I'd want confirmation that the right side is not coming forward with the left side staying still or even moving back a little.