Deadlift Form Check

[Joel Winthrope]

How is my deadlift form, and where can I improve?

deadlift 9 10 23 - YouTube

the fourth rep did slip out of my hands. I completed an additional rep after a rest.

[Mark Rippetoe]

At lockout, chest is up and shoulders are back.

[Joel Winthrope]

thankyou. I will work on my lock out position.

[asm44]

I see two things that can be improved:

1) Your grip is wider than necessary.

2) You should hold your valsalva until the bar is back on the ground.