I would not have been able to guess this was intended for a client had you left out the context and I don't think that's a good thing.
Was including this really necessary? Is the distinction between bodybuilding and strength training relevant to the protein requirements and is that discussion something your target audience should concern themselves with? It's seem unimportant to me, yet you decided to lead with this.
This bit could have been shortened to a single sentence, but more importantly you should figure out how debunking the data cited fits into what you're trying to accomplish, first.
You also didn't state why it's too short a time frame.
There is no connection between this and your critique of the studies. You're not giving me the impression this is important to you when all I've read up 'till now is you pointing out flaws in studies. My expectation while reading was for you to cite better studies (yes, they exist). To me it sounds like your message is: "The studies you provided are wrong. Just trust me bro".
One thing to keep in mind is, why did your client link you this study? Do you really think he looked deeply into the studies cited? Did confirmation bias come into play and why would that be? Is he too lazy, does he not want to eat animals, is he scared because of kidney failure? Is he a fan of the author/website? What's his background? Depending on the answers here, you could have saved yourself a lot of time.
The reason I'm saying this is that if your client has a science background and had looked into it deeply enough to care, he'd have noticed the same cursory flaws you have. So I'm guessing he doesn't give a shit about the studies and there's other things at play, meaning your approach:
might not be the best one, at least not as the core of your argument. I don't think going chronologically is effective either. I'd rather you have went with what's most important or the most convincing refutation.
What if the material for the most convincing rebuttal was provided there? This is an excuse for you not to finish, which maybe indicates you went about things the wrong way. Regardless, always delete crap like this.
Always structure your writing consciously. Who is your audience, what is your goal, etc.
Take a look at Rip's approach:
The Problem with “Exercise Science” | Mark Rippetoe
Notice how he highlighted the the idiotic "squat on unstable surfaces" study, (presumably to get the penny to drop), but then also mentions researchers whose methodologies are sound, which serves another specific purpose. I get that you're not trying to write an article, but these considerations carry over to other communication.
So for sake of argument. Lets say you send this to your client and he responds with a different article citing different studies coming to the same conclusion (that 1g/lbs is BS). What would that tell you? More importantly, why are you expecting the approach you've taken to work?
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To dig into the substance a bit:
Does "sarcoplasmic hypertrophy" require more protein than myofibrillar hypertrophy?
If so, it would have some implications for the protein demands of bodybuilding vs strength training discussion mentioned at the start, if you could agree on a definition for "bodybuilding" and assume it's more successful at accomplishing sarcoplasmic hypertrophy.
A lot of "ifs" I know, but it has got me thinking.