Originally Posted by
BareSteel
Hi Jimmy,
You have a tendency to start the descent with your hips. Instead, use hips and knees together.
Really for a full critique we need a better video. Get your entire body in the shot (even your feet) and preferable get a 45* shot from the rear. Only so much can be determined by a side view - especially so close. I think you might be losing some drive by going a little too deep, but the plate obscures my ability to say this for certain.
I think you've got the idea, but there is some cleaning up to do. Nothing you can do about your height or femur length.