They're looking really good! Others might spot something I missed but I only have a few minors:
- Grip the bar with the base of your fingers first and then wrap your hand around it. Else you'll create a skin fold with that area and at heavier weights it'll become problematic.
- Are those runners? I'd rather deadlift in socks than in shoes with a dampening sole.
- Wait to bend your knees a bit more in the descent, or the bar will slide out from your body on the way down.