Originally Posted by
NKT
Deadlift:
1. You're jerking the bar off of the floor. Instead, establish your start position, tighten your whole body, and then squeeze the weight off of the floor.
2. There is a minor loss of back angle as the bar comes up to your knees. Start with your hips slightly higher.
3. Can't tell for sure because the plates are in the way, but it looks like the bar is too far away from your legs. It should be just about touching your leg the whole way up.
Press:
1. Your ribcage is rolled foreword at the start position. Arch your back (lift your chest up) before you pick up the weight, and keep it that way.
2. Your bar path is curved. It should be vertical; use a little layback at the start position to allow the bar to clear your face, then tuck your body under the bar as you press it up.