Glad to hear you have gotten to the point where you can do the program. Stay with it, keep eating and sleeping, and Good Things will happen.
As far as your squats: not bad, really. The major thing to focus on for you is hip drive. You initiate with your hips out of the hole, but very quickly switch to trying to lift your torso and get vertical. Stop doing that. Stay in your hips throughout the movement, and let your chest rise when it is naturally time to do so, instead of trying to make it do so too early.
Squat on, my friend.
Oh, and if you want to get my attention next time, you need to throw in something about Lord of the Rings, Star Wars, or Game of Thrones.