Originally Posted by
pjthiel
The squats don't look too bad at first glance, although the angle makes it a little hard to tell. I counted the depth as a little high on at least a couple of reps across the sets... but overall, not bad. Foot position is good, knees mostly stay out, and when they come in, I saw you correct it. It's a pretty good low-bar position, elbows stay up. Be sure to keep tight right through the rep.
Deadlift looks like it needs work. Your setup isn't horrible, but the angles are all wrong when you actually start the pull. For me, your back angle is the clearest indicator, i.e. the angle your back makes with the floor. As best I can tell, it's too flat. i.e. your legs are too straight and your chest is pointing down at the floor -- almost horizontal. Even on your "good" rep, the first one, I also notice that you ass moves before the bar. Again, this flattens your back even more before the bar moves. This angle you are pulling from takes a lot of the effort out of the quads and glutes, and directs it at the lower back... hard going, as your set shows toward the later reps.
To correct it, I recommend the following:
1. Setup as you do now.
2. As you take your breath and settle into the pulling position proper, you need to drop your ass down more. How much more is hard to say, but I'd guess at about 4-6".
3. The bar should move first, before anything else. If anything else moves before the bar, pulling effort is being wasted/absorbed in the movement.
As things stand, I suspect you come off the DL with your lower back exhausted. Once you get this right, the lower back will be tired, but you'll feel it in the quads and glutes just as much -- especially the glutes.
Reps three, four and five deteriorate rapidly and you are starting to round your lower back during the lift. This is dangerous. Consider dropping the weight until you can pull with improved form and maintain lumber flexion for the full five reps.
Be aware that this new, correct angle -- once you hit it -- will draw the bar in closer to your shins. I know this because I have two lines of scabs up my shins from the DL. Take Rip's advice and consider getting and wearing lifting pants or long football socks on DL days. They help protect your shins and save us from getting your blood on our hands.