Originally Posted by
jillingworth
First, I'm not an expert so other opinions should probably trump mine. If the bar is away from your shin you have, or will have, trouble with your deadlifts. It really should rub/slide/run along your shin for the whole lift. This may tear your shins up (I have a bald patch along my shins from this), but with those tall socks, it shouldn't be too bad. The closer you keep it to your leg, the easier it is to keep all the other form issues and the less stress there should be on your back. For me, thinking about pulling the bar into my legs with my lats while keeping my arms straight does the trick. You've got some rounding in the lower back which is probably in part due to the bar being too far forward. I think if you can lower your butt down some more this will help, too. At the end of the pull, you should have your knees fully extended (I can't tell from the video if you do or do not have this). Similarly, make sure you finish standing up at the end. This may sound like a lot, but I've seen (and done) worse lifts.
Your press looks alright, though you could reduce the lay back some if you want to be more strict. I think you're finishing with the shrug up of your shoulders, but can't tell for sure from the video. You're letting the bar come down harder than I would personally like for myself, but I don't know that this is a big deal. One thing I've been doing is breathing on the lock out. I get a big breath for the first push, lock it, grab my next breath, and then bring the bar down and push it right back up - similar to the timing for the bench press. I don't know that one way is more or less right than the other, but it feels better to me.