Originally Posted by
Hayden-William Courtland
SQ: A slightly narrower stance may be more comfortable. Work on getting a narrower grip on the bar over time if you can. Let your knees go forward more and get them settled (roughly over your toes) by halfway down. The reaching back with your butt in the bottom should be to just keep your knees from sliding forward in the bottom, not pulling them backwards; the pulling backwards here is taking you off balance behind mid foot. Looks like you also could have a bit more abdominal tightness on the way up (keep your back flat).
DL: You need to fix your setup. Have your elbows pointing out to the sides and get your knees forward more so they are flush with the front of your arms. Your shins should be angled forward slightly. This will have the bar over mid foot (instead of behind which is where it is now). Then use a knees back / push the floor away to initiate the pull (chest and hips should rise together initially).