Squat: For the second squat set rep 1 and 2 are to depth, and rep 3-5 are high. Now, they are to parallell, but Starting Strength teaches depth to be roughly an inch BELOW parallell. Squats are looking much better though!
Deadlift: These look better too but it's easy to have good form on light weight. You need some weight on the bar to get good feedback.
Your hips are a little low. Look at the first rep, your hips rise a tiny amount before the bar leaves the floor, that is your correct starting position. "Lifting your chest" means back extension causing a STRAIGHT back, not to be confused with a VERTICAL back. Stop dropping your hips to get your chest up. Raise your chest without moving your hips. Hook grip shouldn't be an issue if you use chalk.
Shoes look fine to me, though I would still prefer some adidas powerlifts to be honest.
Keep up the good work!