Originally Posted by
Dastardly
This is sure an awkward way to do a critique!
Squat: correct depth, good stance, balanced weight on feet, good gaze direction, appears to be correct bar position.
Make it better by getting mid/upper back tighter, shoulders back, tighter grip on bar, chest out, more driving of the hips
Overhead Press: Correct range of motion, no knee-bend cheating, good intensity!
Make it better by not setting up in such a layed back position. Using back bow-drive is done by starting straight, then springing backwards into a bow, then springing back. Starting in a lay back is a bad idea. Stand straighter. Also, get your elbows more forwards for you start position. Keep bar closer to face during press.
Power clean: Not much good.
Make it better by getting a MUCH tigher and arched back during start position! Use less weight, Pull more fluidly. Be very explosive with your hips and traps, DO NOT REVERSE CURL IT like you are currently doing. Catch it in a very snappy manner with elbows high. Do not slump backwards for your rack. Instead get used to a quarter front squat position (with elbows high and wider stance) and get into the SAME position every time you rack.