1) Go up to the top of this section and read the stickies on filming form checks so you can provide a more useful angle. 2) From what we can see, this doesn't look horrible, but you don't set your back. See the last post (by me) in the first sticky where I link to RIP's 5 steps for the DL. You are skipping step 4. After doing your reading, post another video after your next DL day.