Originally Posted by
IlPrincipeBrutto
Ehm...not really.
You are still yanking the bar off the floor, and rushing through the first pull.
Your elbows are still quite slow, and you rack the bar with them pointing down, rather than forward.
There is also some arm-pulling.
And you added weight, so the bar rises a little less than in the previous video, and you have to limbo your way under it to rack it (particularly evident in the third rep).
I would start fixing the issues from the top down.
Just do a bunch of hang power cleans; bar just above the knees, shoulders well over the bar, shoulder blades pulled together. Slide the bar up the thigh up to jump point, explode, and rack quickly.
To check if the movement is correct, I suggest this procedure: rack the bar and freeze as you are. Don't stand, don't move your elbows, don't move your feet, just freeze.
If your movement is good, you should be able to ride down to a full front squat without changing anything.
If your feet are too wide, if you have limboed under the bar (that is, your hips are under the bar, see third rep in the last video), if your elbows are too low, you won't be able to squat down.
That's the check.
With some practice and some (maybe a lot) of patience, you will get to a good hang clean, with a proper rack position (elbow, hips, feet, the lot).
Then, it will be easier to fix the other parts of the lift, and add it all together to a coherent, beautiful execution.
Hope this helps,
IPB